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[Approved] Gwideon Draconem - Demotheus - 18-10-2014

Name: Gwideon Draconem

Age: 30

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Personality:


Backstory:

Capabilities:

Blacksmithing - Competent : He knows blacksmithing to the point where he’s opted to specialize in small, intricate metalwork rather than large scale things such as shields, armor, and blades. He uses this for mechanical and tinkering purposes. Ie: creating the metal bits of a crossbow, tools, etc.

Woodworking - Apprentice : Much the same as blacksmithing’s purposes. He uses this to make handles for tools, the body for a crossbow, anything else he might need to be made from wood.

Mechanical Engineering - Competent : He specializes in what’s best defined as “gadgets”. He can employ his knowledge of science and math to a fine degree, and create many things such as crossbows, projectile knives, hidden compartments, and so on and so forth. He's not very skilled in creating larger things such as a boat, cart, wagon, trebuche, etc. etc.


Items: A crossbow of his own making with several crossbow bolts, just in case. Several unwritten books and quills, which make up a great majority of his belongings, and an iron dagger for swinging frantically at duskspawn.

It is done.

It is complete.

Ready for review.


RE: [Character Submission] Gwideon Draconem - LuckyLeaf - 19-10-2014

Hey Demo, Leaf here, and no worries, I'm here to review your app.

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Anatomical blacksmithery: I saw this bit in the description of your character that apparently Gwideon has a very good understanding of basic human anatomy. I imagine you meant this knowledge to be on par with knowledge anyone has as a bit common sense, (like when you get stabbed in the heart, you die) but for the sake of clarity, please clarify what you mean by this.

Neutral Grounds: So, I'll just point out this little mistake here. There is no kingdom that is near both portals. The portals themselves are quite a distance apart, and the grounds between them are neutral grounds. So while it's possible that Gwideon's kingdom could have been near one portal, it's impossible for it to have been near both of them.

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Work these two out. They're the only issues as of the moment; shouldn't take too long I don't think.


RE: [Pending] Gwideon Draconem - Demotheus - 19-10-2014

Anatomical blacksmithery? I don't think that's a term I used at all...? xD

But yeah, it was more of a sort of sarcastic remark I guess. A joke more so. If he absolutely needs to he knows where to stick the pointy end of the blade or aim a crossbow at. Just to clarify that he isn't totally inept in combat, but isn't trained or skilled in it either.

As for the second point, I wasn't aware of that. It'd be the Xitian portal, then. Not sure if Lucin's guard the Lucin portal anyway, I'd assume they do. As for the next issue that's sure to arise with this knowledge...

The siege on the city was the result of tensions snapping and people just being like "Screw it lets do it, they look wealthy". That wasn't explained, but now I feel like it might need to be at least a little. Lucin's wouldn't come to their defense because they're there doing their own thing and it would have been a rather quick event, relatively. Lucin's might have been there to help refugee's, but that's the extent I'd assume. They were up until then weary of making any violent attempts towards the city, but after seeing a bunch of small scale attacks on those walls, some other larger heads decided they could take them since no one seemed to take notice of the attacks apart from the citizens and such.

Hope that clears that up.


RE: [Pending] Gwideon Draconem - LuckyLeaf - 20-10-2014

So a couple of other things,

Nether: Dunno if you remember Demo, but the realm 'Nether' is different from the Dusk Realm. The hellish realm that's like the Nether in minecraft, is basically that, and is not where Xitians live, fix that up, and you should be good to go.

Engineering: Also, I'd like to ask you to give a more specific definition of his skill. Specialization in gadgets is a little vague for us. Talk about what he can really do with this skill.


RE: [Pending] Gwideon Draconem - Demotheus - 20-10-2014

Updated. Fixed the mention of the nether. To note there's another reference to the nether, but that's purely metaphorical.

Engineering I fixed, but also I'll specify here it's small scale things. Clocks, crossbows, projectile knives, cute little marrianete things, music boxes, so on and so forth. Not wagons, trebuche's, carts, etc.