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[Pending]Aiko Teen Mesalians - PandaNekoChan - 11-07-2016
In Game Name (IGN):
PandaNeko_Chan
How did you find us? (Forums, friend, previous member, etc…)
Looking for a serious rp.
About You:
An Aphmou fan who is looking for a serious rp to get lost in.
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name:Aiko
Age:
24
Gender:
Female
Appearance:
Brown Haired, past shoulder length, Brown eyed. 4"5'. Wears a full body cloak. Often mistaken as a child by her height.
Personality:
Serious about most situation. A loner. Prefers to find alternative methods to solving a problem.
Backstory:
Aiko's parents were casualties of the civil war. Being conceived in a harsh environment and with military parents she was brought up to be a warrior. Her small size and nonthreatening appearance makes her a great assassin. But that was the and this is now. She was 8 then. The war ended and she was alone. Now taking jobs just to get by. Resorting to begging when clients became low. Being cutesy wasn't her thing though and using her looks for money was outright embarrassing. So when a job comes around she makes sure she doesn't screw it up. A job to find the cause of some curse the Forbidden Lands. What could go wrong?
Capabilities:
She is deadly with a dagger and in charm.
Items:
Full body cloak, and a dagger.
Additional Comments:
Veteran who lost everything. Classic story arch. In the right hands this could become a well rounded character. Please leave criticism and inconsistencies.
RE: Aiko Teen Xitian - LuckyLeaf - 11-07-2016
Hello there, I'm Leaf here to grade your app.
So first off, I'm sorry to say that we are not allowing new players to play as a Lucin or a Xitian until they had a good feel of the setting. We ask that you make your character a Mesalian, and edit the current app, or submit a new one.
One other thing you might want to know is that currently, the setting is on year 47AV, and the Purge was between years 2 and 5 AV. You can use the server lore as reference.
Once you're finished please bump the thread. Good luck!
RE: [Pending]Aiko Teen Xitian - PandaNekoChan - 11-07-2016
I read the lore and I was really confused on the scaling of time, sorry. And Yeah I can edit.
RE: [Pending]Aiko Teen Mesalians - LuckyLeaf - 12-07-2016
Right, sorry for the delay, I was held up by work.
So my question for the second round is: how did an 8 year old urchin survive as a mercenary?
I'm not quite sure if clients would readily pick young girls for such tasks, regardless of how capable she is.
Perhaps you could expand the story to explain that?
Also, I'd like to suggest the reopening of the portal to the Dusk Realm, and the emergence of dragons as possible events in her life as well, if you feel up for it.
That's it for now, bump the thread once you're done!
RE: [Pending]Aiko Teen Mesalians - PandaNekoChan - 12-07-2016
(12-07-2016, 08:37 PM)LuckyLeaf Wrote: Right, sorry for the delay, I was held up by work.
So my question for the second round is: how did an 8 year old urchin survive as a mercenary?
I'm not quite sure if clients would readily pick young girls for such tasks, regardless of how capable she is.
Perhaps you could expand the story to explain that?
Also, I'd like to suggest the reopening of the portal to the Dusk Realm, and the emergence of dragons as possible events in her life as well, if you feel up for it.
That's it for now, bump the thread once you're done!
I will try but I may be offline a bit because yesterday my pc died. The fan overheated. I maybe idle a bit till I can afford a new pc.