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[Approved] Application - Broken_Exodus - Broken_Exodus - 23-07-2016
In Game Name (IGN): Broken_Exodus
How did you find us? (Forums, friend, previous member, etc…) Honestly? I was randomly searching through Minecraft related stuff and came across this a few years ago, now that I own Minecraft I thought I would check you all out
About You: I'm a veteran Roleplayer with a few years (or thousands of years if you count the years my Characters have lived haha..) of experience, I'm 22, 23 in less then a month, I take my RP's seriously but rarely anything else, I've learned not to take life too seriously as it does kill you in the end anyway..
CHARACTER INFORMATION
Name: Adam NoreAge: 35
Gender: Male
Appearance: Adam wears a dark military-like robe with red trim of an old Kingdom long forgotten, he has belts for any and all different types of weapons hanging off him but he generally is seen with only sword hanging off his belt, his robe also has a whole bunch of hidden pockets for things, he stands ruffly 5'10 Extremely sturdy, with some profound mussels, He has black hair and dark hazel eyes, he walks with a very mild limp and is covered in scars underneath his clothing..
Personality: Seeing his fair share of bloodshed during The Great Betrayal has made him bitter and cold, after seeing people, men, women and children, Slaughtered on command left a bad taste in Adam's mouth and a general distrust for authority, unfortunately after living in the forbidden lands for years it has made him the very thing he despises, a morally screwed up person, he thinks only for himself, so if he helps you it isn't out of the kindness of his own heart, he values little and trusts even less, he is distant when around others and bubbly people generally make him angry, though outwardly he is a very calm and collected person, allot of people would compare him to the most noble of knights, yet, when he is in combat or if he gets angry he is one of the most savagely violent people, he looks down on all those who cant fight, he in all rights could be considered insane, talking to himself, though in actuality he talks to Rythen Sithis, his God, he is easily used as a tool or a good "pet", for those who uses his hate, or his beliefs against him, even though he is quite intelligent, he is blinded by his hate and his beliefs, Sad to see the man who used to be so pure so loving and kind drop to this level...
Backstory: Adam was born just after the start of the Civil War (if I did my math right, 49AV-35yrs=14AV, CW started 13AV probably didn't do math right, Need correction) to a noble family in a far away Kingdom known as Asiredith in the capital, New Hope, His father was a high ranking Knight of the Void, a group of Knights whom pledged their life to the service of the Kingdom Asiredith's god, Rythen Sithis; Master of the Void, Adam's mother was the High Priestess of the Temple, as High Priestess she was the final voice when it came to court rulings and judged all those whom broke the laws, these jobs kept Adam's Mother and Father away from home for long periods leaving Adam's uncle, a retired Void Knight, to raise him.
Important Asiredith Kingdom Lore:
Asiredith was usually able to be kept out of major things, only a few incidents here and there, they were Loyal and served both Xitians and Lucins throughout history, killing at their will or defending important places etc etc, eventually things got quite for a few years, until the Civil War, Asiredith was called on by a Kingdom to help them take over a few other kingdoms, because at the time, Void Knights, as people called them, were well sought after for their Capabilities and Mastering of virtually every weapon known, the stories of Void Knights defeating Legions upon Legions of both Xitian and Lucins, whether true or not, also helped on this, During this time Adam was born. Asiredith was eventually destroyed during what the few surviving Asiredithions call 'The Great Betrayal' three ally kingdoms betrayed Asiredith, One called the Void Knights away and trapped them in a cave then collapsed it into the ocean, while cornering and killing those who were left, another calling away most of the main army to help defend a city, slaughtering them in a trap, the last ally Kingdom was inside Asiredith's walls during a siege from a Kingdom that was paid off, turned on them opened the gates and well...you can figure out the rest, all Void Knights and squires who weren't away died protecting the people getting them to escape tunnels, unfortunately only 50 Asiredithions survived.
Back to Adam:
Adams Uncle was a very strict man, during his youth Adam was regular child having fun but under the strict rules of his Uncle, until he became a Void Knight Squire at the age of 5, Adam's family was very proud the day Adam was taken to be a Void Knight Squire a rare honor considering there were only 1000 Void Knights at any given time, even less Squires, 10 years pass in Adam's training, Void Knights Squires during training only focus on one weapon at a time, so by the age of 15 Adam only learned to be an Advanced at the sword, and was learning the Bow, then The Great Betrayal happened, Madness in the streets, his uncle with whom he considered more of a father then his father found him fighting a few footmen trying to kill a child, his uncle begged him to run instead of staying, making Adam swear an oath to make sure Asiredith and it's Void Knights never truly die, fleeing the city, Adam and hundreds of Asiredithions fled into the night, the coming months Asiredithions were hunted and killed, large bounty's for anyone who killed them, Adam banished himself into forbidden lands knowing few would dare follow, living off fruits and the occasional pallet of meat he survived for 20 long drooling years, but those years of isolation and violence drove him to the darker side of the Void, Swearing the oath of Blood, he became a Dark Void Knight, his life now devoted to training and his Dark God, his god and his training has brought him out of his self imposed exile in the mountains and into a nearby town...
Capabilities: Adam's Capabilities are thanks to the forbidden lands and his 'small' amount training, he is an Advanced in Swordsmanship and a Competent Bowman thanks to his training with the Void Knights, he has Basic knowledge in Medicine and Survival due to his years in the forbidden lands, Thanks to both he is fairly Athletic.
Items: a Good Sword, a Bow with a few Arrows and a Eye of Ender, (why Eye of Ender or whatever they're called here? its a totem connection to his God)
Additional Comments:
Hopefully Adam's skills in no way makes him OP (again hopefully) I tried to rationalize his skills = timespent, I tried to be fair to both Adam and everyone, anyway, if anything needs to be tweaked or I screwed up Timeline wise which I seriously think I did, let me know, the reason Adam is built this way is due to my previous RP's, all of his Backstory actually happened in other RP's, spanning a few actual years, Adam was Cut and Pasted with a few tweaks here and there to fit perfectly (hopefully), he was also built to be able to be used in most every type of RP Adam has been a character built by years and years of real time.. he is my go too, I could have spent a few days writing his backstory in better details, but I kinda figured about an hour picking and choosing important stuff was good enough, I hope that this RP can bring a new element into his backstory that I can use in other RP's eventually ^_^ I also hope this server and RP is still alive and kicking because I am excited ...
I am willing to edit his age/a few things if I got the timeline wrong which again I think I did, I love this lore and I am excited to eventually join it.
RE: [New] Application - Broken_Exodus - LuckyLeaf - 24-07-2016
Hey there, so sorry for the late reply, but staff was generally busy irl , and I wanted to do your app justice.
So, let's get right to it.
First off, just so you know, Adam doesn't need to leave the forbidden lands, the setting is there, so he just needs to find his way into our town.
Secondly, lorewise you're fine, the timeline seems alright as well. Just remember that the portal to the Dusk realm reopened and dragons emerged, seemingly out of nowhere.
Now, a question: how did Adam survive all alone, away from civilization? As far as I can see, he doesn't know the difference between magic shrooms and truffles. I asume he lived off fruits amd stuff, but just clarify for me, if you please.
And lastly, the skills. Now the expert level tags require 15 years of experience, that is experience outside learning the craft. So if Adam spent 15 years learning, from the age of 5, and had 15 more years to practice, it would work, if he wasn't competent with a bow as well. So if you want to stick with two combat skills, you could remove the bow skill, or put his swordmanship down to Advanced.
I think that is all for now, please bump the thread once you're done.
RE: [New] Application - Broken_Exodus - Broken_Exodus - 24-07-2016
(24-07-2016, 12:39 PM)LuckyLeaf Wrote: Hey there, so sorry for the late reply, but staff was generally busy irl , and I wanted to do your app justice.
So, let's get right to it.
First off, just so you know, Adam doesn't need to leave the forbidden lands, the setting is there, so he just needs to find his way into our town.
Secondly, lorewise you're fine, the timeline seems alright as well. Just remember that the portal to the Dusk realm reopened and dragons emerged, seemingly out of nowhere.
Now, a question: how did Adam survive all alone, away from civilization? As far as I can see, he doesn't know the difference between magic shrooms and truffles. I asume he lived off fruits amd stuff, but just clarify for me, if you please.
And lastly, the skills. Now the expert level tags require 15 years of experience, that is experience outside learning the craft. So if Adam spent 15 years learning, from the age of 5, and had 15 more years to practice, it would work, if he wasn't competent with a bow as well. So if you want to stick with two combat skills, you could remove the bow skill, or put his swordmanship down to Advanced.
I think that is all for now, please bump the thread once you're done.
Oh yeah, I completely spaced on the Dragons part, Asiredith was gone, and its people scattered, just two years before (again if I did my math right, math was never my strongsuit) I also for some odd reason didn't realize that the setting took place IN the forbidden lands itself and figured that it was nearby.. I don't know how I didn't notice that, hahaha -facepalm- the skills bit was a simple misread, and makes way more sense your way haha, anyway I changed around the things asked, I highlighted my changes so you don't have to reread my giant wall of text. Oh, before I forget, HI! and it ok, people have lives, time liberty's can be taken.
RE: [Pending] Application - Broken_Exodus - LuckyLeaf - 24-07-2016
Alright, everything seems to check out, I call this app APPROVED. I'll send you the server ip, and whitelist you. You'll be tested when you log in, so brush up on our rules.