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RE: [Pending] Felix Sutor - Hutchy - 05-10-2013
Alright French you’re close. Now for the next round.
Firstly, this may just be an issue with the wording:
‘...His parents loved him dearly, and often spoiled the little boy with whatever his heart would desire...’
‘...Throughout Felix's childhood, his family could never provide much...’
This is contradictory and a little confusing. An explanation or edit of the wording would solve both this problem. Please review this.
Secondly, while it is not necessary for the application’s acceptance, I would recommend that you change the format of the skills section to use the accepted scales in the skill guide.
RE: [Pending] Felix Sutor - French_Fri - 05-10-2013
Updated changed wording to make more sense and changed skills
RE: [Pending] Felix Sutor - Hutchy - 07-10-2013
Alright French, with that edit I can accept this application.
Well done.