14-04-2013, 10:20 AM
Updated and ready for review, I think this time I will have gotten it right.
I tried to fix the grammar errors that I could find as well as I could, but I'm still unsure about it so I hope it's not a too huge of an issue.
I have elaborated on some of the skills more, namely Herbalism (mostly to include poisons ), painting and stone crafting.
I've removed the word "responsible" from the definition I associated it with, but not the definition itself. I can't find a general word to describe that, so it will remain the overall trait itself.
I've also made sure to include a little more elaboration and some changes in the backstory with regards to how he met the caravan and the process of deciding to go or not.
Hopefully I'll have a character now xD
Thanks.
I tried to fix the grammar errors that I could find as well as I could, but I'm still unsure about it so I hope it's not a too huge of an issue.
I have elaborated on some of the skills more, namely Herbalism (mostly to include poisons ), painting and stone crafting.
I've removed the word "responsible" from the definition I associated it with, but not the definition itself. I can't find a general word to describe that, so it will remain the overall trait itself.
I've also made sure to include a little more elaboration and some changes in the backstory with regards to how he met the caravan and the process of deciding to go or not.
Hopefully I'll have a character now xD
Thanks.