22-04-2013, 05:38 AM
Thank you very much for taking the time to grade this Zarky, I'll do my best to get this done correctly.
It's now edited, as follows:
Removed the journal style back story, added a new typical method one, made edits to the plot.
Tweaked the skills, removed joinery all together.
Edited inventory.
I believe this is ready for a second go. ^_^
It's now edited, as follows:
Removed the journal style back story, added a new typical method one, made edits to the plot.
Tweaked the skills, removed joinery all together.
Edited inventory.
I believe this is ready for a second go. ^_^