Hello Spit, I'm going to just do some quick points that I noticed while I was checking it over.
1. The town your character came from will need some lore documentation, talk to Conrad if you have any questions about that.
2. The skills of thievery need to be fleshed out a bit more, because there are many skills that go into that.
3. As you change the skills of thievery, do keep in mind the others might have to be lowered or vice-verse to compensate.
I'll try to go more in depth when I get the time, but that should keep you a little busy.
1. The town your character came from will need some lore documentation, talk to Conrad if you have any questions about that.
2. The skills of thievery need to be fleshed out a bit more, because there are many skills that go into that.
3. As you change the skills of thievery, do keep in mind the others might have to be lowered or vice-verse to compensate.
I'll try to go more in depth when I get the time, but that should keep you a little busy.