08-03-2014, 02:24 AM
Alright sorry for the wait, lets get back to this.
First off, I fixed most of the points you made, except for the parts about the lore of Saleph and Lore Relation. No that Saleph doesn't have its own language, does it still need a history, or can I delete that part? I would like to know this before I add Lore Relation to the backstory.
Second of all, I think I have reached something of a compromise on the subject of the Bowed Instruments skill. I have taken out the violin, and lowered the skill to Basic. However, the other instruments (Rebab, Morin Khuur, and Ehru) are all very similar, in theory. They area ll rather small stringed instruments played upright with a bow. The Rebab and Morin Khuur both have two strings, while the Ehru has one to three. He knows how to play these at a slightly lesser level than the Rebab, but he still can play them well. He's had these instruments for a good portion of his life, and received instruction from Haussam, and they even provided income for him, at one point. Therefore, I believe it is fair to say that he can play all three of these on a basic level, at least, though I would argue that competent makes perfect sense.
First off, I fixed most of the points you made, except for the parts about the lore of Saleph and Lore Relation. No that Saleph doesn't have its own language, does it still need a history, or can I delete that part? I would like to know this before I add Lore Relation to the backstory.
Second of all, I think I have reached something of a compromise on the subject of the Bowed Instruments skill. I have taken out the violin, and lowered the skill to Basic. However, the other instruments (Rebab, Morin Khuur, and Ehru) are all very similar, in theory. They area ll rather small stringed instruments played upright with a bow. The Rebab and Morin Khuur both have two strings, while the Ehru has one to three. He knows how to play these at a slightly lesser level than the Rebab, but he still can play them well. He's had these instruments for a good portion of his life, and received instruction from Haussam, and they even provided income for him, at one point. Therefore, I believe it is fair to say that he can play all three of these on a basic level, at least, though I would argue that competent makes perfect sense.