05-09-2021, 10:26 AM
Some format issues.
Other than such minor issue, there's some lack of relation to the lore. Sounds good and interesting otherwise. Though maybe I cringe a bit at "Norze" since I'm Swedish, ngl.
Other than such minor issue, there's some lack of relation to the lore. Sounds good and interesting otherwise. Though maybe I cringe a bit at "Norze" since I'm Swedish, ngl.

