[FireDog]

Al right, round two.

1. Skills: Staff feels farming should be brought down to competent. An advanced farming skill would imply that he has worked in varying climates and with several variations of plants. Please revise.

2. Personality: This is in the general direction, but I would like some more. Go into more detail with your characters personality. Remember, this is your character in his or her form. Try to really wring out just what kind of person your character is. If you're having trouble, think of things like his or her favorite food, non-working past times, or activities such as dancing or attending parties. All of these things can lead to what kind of personality your character is.

This is all I got at the moment. Good luck and really nail that personality section.

[Syncrist0]

Thanks for the speedy replies. I fixed the farming skill situation and added things to his personality section.

[FireDog]

Hey, me again.

1. Personality...Again: Perhaps this is more of my fault but I would like you to not use a list format. Instead, I would prefer paragraphs for personality so that way it is more detailed. If you're having trouble with this, think of reasons why your character might be this way or act this way. Please revise.

[Syncrist0]

Alright, thanks for the feedback. I put it into paragraph form explaining why he acts that way.

[FireDog]