17-08-2013, 09:31 PM
Alright, final changes made according to Firedog. Awaiting approval
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FireDog
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18-08-2013, 07:52 PM
Hey Tech, me again.
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I would change this to the Lucins spewing water or wind, or water Lucins creating ice shards. Large waves are a bit of a stretch. Take a look at the powers guide. Lucin and Xitians are not exactly strong enough with their powers to create storms or floods. Just try to ground their powers a little. Xitians and Lucins are not as strong as one may think.
2. History skill- I suggest you take this down a notch. More than likely enslavement onwards. Nobody really knows anything that far back. Historical records would be slightly before the war, and most was lost. So I suggest bringing down his knowledge quite a bit.
3. Skills - Separation of hunting and combat. - I'd take one or the other. Or both relatively low. Hunting and melee combat are not the same. The short sword is not a good hunting weapon.
4. Science skill - Please go into a specific field. It seems that you are mostly into physics with this, but stick to that preferably.
I apologies for the added things. I'm just trying to take this in easier blocks for you to handle.
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Quote:- Removed the ability of Lucins to cast storms, changed it to waves of water
I would change this to the Lucins spewing water or wind, or water Lucins creating ice shards. Large waves are a bit of a stretch. Take a look at the powers guide. Lucin and Xitians are not exactly strong enough with their powers to create storms or floods. Just try to ground their powers a little. Xitians and Lucins are not as strong as one may think.
2. History skill- I suggest you take this down a notch. More than likely enslavement onwards. Nobody really knows anything that far back. Historical records would be slightly before the war, and most was lost. So I suggest bringing down his knowledge quite a bit.
3. Skills - Separation of hunting and combat. - I'd take one or the other. Or both relatively low. Hunting and melee combat are not the same. The short sword is not a good hunting weapon.
4. Science skill - Please go into a specific field. It seems that you are mostly into physics with this, but stick to that preferably.
I apologies for the added things. I'm just trying to take this in easier blocks for you to handle.
Futuretechnical
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18-08-2013, 09:12 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you pointed those out, will edit and message you when done.
FireDog
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22-08-2013, 03:45 PM
Hey Thech. Here we go again. Apologize for the delays as before. Staff and I have been discussing the skills. Generally, you have a bit too many. I would suggest with only a few.
1. Skills- Sciecne - Now I understand that I asked you to change this, but I would not go with Phyiscis as the science with tables of elements. I would more or less remove the science skill as it goes to other things within Mesalia. Perhaps focus more of Lore and History then.
2. Skills - Hunting/Combat - You still have these as the same skill. I would make it one of the other if your character knows how to hunt with spears. Using a spear for combat is different from using it for hunting.
3. Skills- Blacksmithing - Blacksmithing is a bit of a complicated skill and art. I would remove this.
4. Skills, drawing - The others are saying that you should remove this. Drawing can be difficult.
Knocking down science, drawing, blacksmithing, and hunting or combat will be much better. As that will remain will be climbing, Lore and History, and survival. Rather a much longer list.
1. Skills- Sciecne - Now I understand that I asked you to change this, but I would not go with Phyiscis as the science with tables of elements. I would more or less remove the science skill as it goes to other things within Mesalia. Perhaps focus more of Lore and History then.
2. Skills - Hunting/Combat - You still have these as the same skill. I would make it one of the other if your character knows how to hunt with spears. Using a spear for combat is different from using it for hunting.
3. Skills- Blacksmithing - Blacksmithing is a bit of a complicated skill and art. I would remove this.
4. Skills, drawing - The others are saying that you should remove this. Drawing can be difficult.
Knocking down science, drawing, blacksmithing, and hunting or combat will be much better. As that will remain will be climbing, Lore and History, and survival. Rather a much longer list.
Futuretechnical
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22-08-2013, 08:20 PM
Alright, done.
By the way, the table of elements is actually not physics but chemistry xP
By the way, the table of elements is actually not physics but chemistry xP