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[Trashed] Verti's Application
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In Game Name(IGN):
Vertified_Valid

Why do you want to join?
I read the lore and had some time to explore the settings through the forms and I think it would be a fun experience to play on this server.

Do you have any RP'ing experience?
I do, I am in a tabletop campaign, I play various MMORPGs in which I take part of actually BEING my character.

Tell us a bit about yourself:
Well I'm a huge gamer girl. I enjoy roleplaying as well as playing game on PC. I like writing, drawing, and acting. Although I can be shy in real life. I don't like being forced to do something I don't want to do but sometimes I have to do it. I also don't like mean people!

Your Character Biography:
Justalyne Clarke is a young girl who is at the age of 14. Most would say she isn't beautiful but more.. handsome than anything. She has a fox-like face with dirty blonde hair down to her shoulders and stands at about 5'9 while having a very slender body frame. From a first glance not even the keenest of eyes would be able to tell she was a craftswoman, unless there was something indicating so.

Justalyne likes to think of herself as a girl with a stone-cold heart. Thinking she can handle anything after her months traveling to the Forbidden Lands. Of course, still being a minor she is very foolish and makes poor choices. She gets her attitude from her father. Always thinking that there is nothing that can't be done. Therefore Justalyne thinks she can do anything she wants.

When Justalyne was one, their parents had to keep moving from place to place. Mesalians had become very greedy at this time and felt the need to force people out of their homes. After they had found land where nobody wanted, Justalyne's father decided to teach her how to craft figurines out of wood after four years of her growing up. She naturally caught onto the skill and her father looked over her with great pride. After this he quickly began to have her help in his woodworking shop. Always crafting in the back room so he would have more things to sell to the customers.

After two years of working in her fathers shop, Justalyne was taught how to craft bows and arrows. With slight trouble, she caught on slowly. Her father continued having her work for him. Her mother also taught her how to cook and clean while she wasn't in her fathers store. This continued for four years. Until Justalyne got rather bored of crafting Bows and Arrows for her father. She required more adventure so she decided to run away. Hoping she could get a boat ride to the new continent that various people have been traveling to. She found a boat but they had refused to let her ride along due to her age. However, the mighty Justalyne does not go down so easy!

She hopped in a barrel, covering the top with the lid. She waited for what seemed like hours until she was picked up and carried into the ship. Due to her light body frame, they had mistaken her for a barrel of flower or salt. Now in the storage compartment of the ship. Justalyne felt victorious and fed off scraps during the night when most of the travelers were asleep. This wasn't a pleasurable experience for the young girl so after the months of poor eating she traveled up to see if she could beg for food. A couple of sailors found out about the stowaway and took her to the captain.

He had decided it was to late to turn the ship around and came to the conclusion of making her useful. Taking using her as an assistant to the cook. Justalyne enjoyed the rest of her trip and was loved by most of the travelers on the ship. She was filled with joy as she heard the loud 'LAND HO!' and she rushed up to the deck, seeing the port. She sadly was then left on her own in the city. Her luckily gained fame disappearing just as quickly as it came to her. There she was.. Left in the wilderness in which she arrived.




Specify your character's skills:
My character is a decent bowyer and fletcher who is also looking to train as a blacksmith.

Do your character bring anything to the setting (part from clothes)?
She will bring a couple carving knives and a locket with a miniature crest on it in the shape of a orange eagle.

Anything you'd like to add:
I'm not the best writer in the world. Forgive me if the bio is bad.
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Just a side note, I find it awkard you guys don't ask for what a skin looks like.
#3
Welcome to Mesalia. I'm Michelle, and I'll be looking at your whitelist application.
Initially, you put this in the wrong section, but I've moved it for you. It's fine.
After a person is accepted into the whitelist, they're tested IG on the rules and their RP. The staff member holding the test usually checks out the skin there. For the most part, it just isn't as important as ensuring the application is sound.

1. Please specify your character's age. This is important as it allows the staff to ensure your character's backstory correlates with the lore of Mesalia. (E.g. "Y should X years old when the war happened".)
2. Your character's backstory also requires more relation to the lore of Mesalia. Did any of the events mentioned effect her? If so, how? If not, why? Also, your character's backstory must end with them arriving at the forbidden lands alone. Please revise this.
3. More detail is required overall, particularly in regards to your character's personality. Please elaborate on it, and consider how evidence in her backstory would support her personality.
4. The skill set could also be more exhaustive. The backstory mentions she knows how to craft. Is this just in regards to fletching, or can she make other tools?

That's all. Good luck.
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Thanks Michelle. I have to read more of the Lore and I am still a newbie of sorts. I'll be sure to read through all the lore and I swore I put she was 26 in there. Oh well I will edit and notify you when I have done so. I also need to do math I suppose to make her not like 100 years old or something. Thanks again and I will be sure to edit it.
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