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Julius Votano
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29-04-2013, 08:59 PM
The only thing I can nitpick from here is that his dead wife/significant other isn't given a name. If you're going to name the character's parents, then you should at probably also name other people significant to him.

When you've done that, consider this approved.
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Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 25-04-2013, 10:08 PM
RE: Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 29-01-2014, 10:47 PM
Re: [NEW] Julius Votano - by TinyTim77 - 26-04-2013, 02:55 PM
Re: [NEW] Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 26-04-2013, 03:56 PM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by Michelle - 27-04-2013, 07:29 AM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 28-04-2013, 07:17 PM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by Michelle - 28-04-2013, 09:22 PM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 29-04-2013, 08:51 PM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by Michelle - 29-04-2013, 08:59 PM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 29-04-2013, 09:34 PM
Re: [PENDING] Julius Votano - by Michelle - 29-04-2013, 09:46 PM
Re: Julius Votano - by French_Fri - 11-05-2013, 10:43 AM

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