21-02-2013, 07:20 PM
Done editing. Hopefully this is enough.
All the edits are colored dark green.
Edit: Changed color because dark green was a bit hard to distinguish among the black.
1. Some bits added in the general backstory to add to his personality.
2. Removed Alchemy altogether and working with poison.
3. Seven is now 18 years old, not 16.
4. Lore relation elaborated; the Order is now a group of Xitians.
All the edits are colored dark green.
Edit: Changed color because dark green was a bit hard to distinguish among the black.
1. Some bits added in the general backstory to add to his personality.
2. Removed Alchemy altogether and working with poison.
3. Seven is now 18 years old, not 16.
4. Lore relation elaborated; the Order is now a group of Xitians.