1. I'll skim through and fix what I can find. Thanks for the heads up.
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2. Will do. Added effect and what not can be taken out. Looking at it now, I'd have to agree with ya.
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3. Hmm. You're right. Will notch it down.
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4. Seems these plot holes need mending as well. I'll see if I can take that bit out and do something different with it.
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5. I know you mean Zerek. And a desert? I wasn't aware of that. I suppose I could squeeze in something about having more of a struggle against that.
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I'll reply again once I get this fixed.
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2. Will do. Added effect and what not can be taken out. Looking at it now, I'd have to agree with ya.
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3. Hmm. You're right. Will notch it down.
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4. Seems these plot holes need mending as well. I'll see if I can take that bit out and do something different with it.
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5. I know you mean Zerek. And a desert? I wasn't aware of that. I suppose I could squeeze in something about having more of a struggle against that.
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I'll reply again once I get this fixed.