16-07-2013, 02:45 PM
Oh boy, it's like Punchout. Only with words.
1. Well Darn. How do I keep missing them. Another skim or two under way.
2. Hmmm... I swear I thought I stated the fact he wanted to try and fix things with them. I'll be sure to get something put in about that.
3. Seems I'll need a little work on this bit. It may take me a while, seeing as I came up with this nearly on a whim. Something added to the story, even in small detail could work. Or maybe more clarification.
Again, will post after this one when done.
1. Well Darn. How do I keep missing them. Another skim or two under way.
2. Hmmm... I swear I thought I stated the fact he wanted to try and fix things with them. I'll be sure to get something put in about that.
3. Seems I'll need a little work on this bit. It may take me a while, seeing as I came up with this nearly on a whim. Something added to the story, even in small detail could work. Or maybe more clarification.
Again, will post after this one when done.

