16-08-2013, 03:00 PM
Hello once again, Generic, just a few more things I noticed after reading it again. Sorry about not seeing it all at once, but sometimes that is how this process goes.
1. Advanced skills at 24 are usually the only one they have, lacking anything else, since your character has other skills, you should bump it down competent.
2. I am confused at the siege, did his father stop working because of the siege? And what age did he start learning those skills of thievery/tailoring.
3. Also if you could include somewhere his appearance, it would be appreciated.
1. Advanced skills at 24 are usually the only one they have, lacking anything else, since your character has other skills, you should bump it down competent.
2. I am confused at the siege, did his father stop working because of the siege? And what age did he start learning those skills of thievery/tailoring.
3. Also if you could include somewhere his appearance, it would be appreciated.