28-09-2013, 09:34 AM
(This post was last modified: 28-09-2013, 09:34 AM by Spitfire333.)
Hey, thanks for the response.
1. I realized it wasn't very clear, and I elaborated on it, it should be acceptable now.
2. I've edited the elephants out, because they seem to be causing a bit of controversy, and they're not important at all. I just put them in for a little extra flavor. This part should be fine, now.
1. I realized it wasn't very clear, and I elaborated on it, it should be acceptable now.
2. I've edited the elephants out, because they seem to be causing a bit of controversy, and they're not important at all. I just put them in for a little extra flavor. This part should be fine, now.