[Hutchy]

It is time, French... for feedback.

• In regards to your personality traits, I’m afraid we do not accept a bullet list anymore. Try to expand your points and write a more complex paragraph or two describing his personality instead.

• '...Because of this, he didn’t always like it outside much either.
  When the time had come, at age 16,...'
  That's quite a large gap with little detail on events between childhood and mid-teens. We need more detail of events between these two points. Did he attend a school and receive a formal education? What were his relations with friends and extended family? Factors like these give us a better indicator of how they helped Felix become the character he is.

• 'He could either be a Cobbler, making shoes alongside his father, or a Hatter, and work with his mother to make marvelous hats for the people of Venia.'
  Is there a particular reason why he could only choose one or the other? Please elaborate.

• This MAY be an inconsistency, but I may also be nitpicking.
  'Whenever they’d scrounge out an old piece of leather from the trash, or cloth from the gutter, Felix would try to make something with it, but it always failed.'
  Earlier in the backstory he is described as being 'fluent in his trade', implying he had some skill. Please explain this point a little further.

As a side note, I apologise for taking so long with this round of feedback. A combination of little sleep and frustration in my household isn’t a good mix.

When you have addressed these points, bump the thread and we can continue.