05-11-2013, 11:44 PM
3ll! *huggleS*
Hai! I get to grade your app so get ready for some Pinkin' up the place.
Lore relation:
So the lore relation with the father is good, my only issue is that there isn't a whole lot that's impacted Koi directly. So if you could add more relation to the lore in ways that effect Koi that would be wonderful.
Skills:
Koi is all of 18, he's got both too many skills and the ones he has are too advanced for that age. Try to drop one and some skill levels for me, or change the age to be a bit more appropriate for all of that.
On that note, it's been pointed out to me that Koi's abuse may have been a little counter productive to his improvment as it can be hard to advance one's skill when hurt all the time, or with a boot in your face. Just some food for thought.
That's all that's jumping out at me at the moment. Bump when you've updated for me. Most importantly though, welcome back. We missed you. :3
Hai! I get to grade your app so get ready for some Pinkin' up the place.
Lore relation:
So the lore relation with the father is good, my only issue is that there isn't a whole lot that's impacted Koi directly. So if you could add more relation to the lore in ways that effect Koi that would be wonderful.
Skills:
Koi is all of 18, he's got both too many skills and the ones he has are too advanced for that age. Try to drop one and some skill levels for me, or change the age to be a bit more appropriate for all of that.
On that note, it's been pointed out to me that Koi's abuse may have been a little counter productive to his improvment as it can be hard to advance one's skill when hurt all the time, or with a boot in your face. Just some food for thought.
That's all that's jumping out at me at the moment. Bump when you've updated for me. Most importantly though, welcome back. We missed you. :3