24-02-2013, 06:27 PM
Welcome to Mesalia. I'm Michelle, and I'll be looking at your whitelist application.
Initially, you put this in the wrong section, but I've moved it for you. It's fine.
After a person is accepted into the whitelist, they're tested IG on the rules and their RP. The staff member holding the test usually checks out the skin there. For the most part, it just isn't as important as ensuring the application is sound.
1. Please specify your character's age. This is important as it allows the staff to ensure your character's backstory correlates with the lore of Mesalia. (E.g. "Y should X years old when the war happened".)
2. Your character's backstory also requires more relation to the lore of Mesalia. Did any of the events mentioned effect her? If so, how? If not, why? Also, your character's backstory must end with them arriving at the forbidden lands alone. Please revise this.
3. More detail is required overall, particularly in regards to your character's personality. Please elaborate on it, and consider how evidence in her backstory would support her personality.
4. The skill set could also be more exhaustive. The backstory mentions she knows how to craft. Is this just in regards to fletching, or can she make other tools?
That's all. Good luck.
Initially, you put this in the wrong section, but I've moved it for you. It's fine.
After a person is accepted into the whitelist, they're tested IG on the rules and their RP. The staff member holding the test usually checks out the skin there. For the most part, it just isn't as important as ensuring the application is sound.
1. Please specify your character's age. This is important as it allows the staff to ensure your character's backstory correlates with the lore of Mesalia. (E.g. "Y should X years old when the war happened".)
2. Your character's backstory also requires more relation to the lore of Mesalia. Did any of the events mentioned effect her? If so, how? If not, why? Also, your character's backstory must end with them arriving at the forbidden lands alone. Please revise this.
3. More detail is required overall, particularly in regards to your character's personality. Please elaborate on it, and consider how evidence in her backstory would support her personality.
4. The skill set could also be more exhaustive. The backstory mentions she knows how to craft. Is this just in regards to fletching, or can she make other tools?
That's all. Good luck.
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