05-12-2013, 12:09 AM
I've changed her backstory to give her experience with various different styles of architecture as I decided having her knowledgeable, no matter how talented, in only one single style reduced the possibilities for her dramatically. Adding distant surrounding towns also gives more probability to the group I mentioned freeing her as now the towns are actually partially established. I've clarified what the book is and I knocked architecture down to competent. Sorry I missed the "bit about yourself" section, not sure how that happened.

