17-12-2013, 07:28 PM
Right, so going back to where we left off…
1. The skill changes are fine; competent horse riding and wagon-driving would not be difficult to achieve. However, I’ve noticed you haven’t included any skill that includes animal breeding. Was this intentional? I understand that animal breeding doesn’t quite involve a skill, but in some parts of your application you imply Heidi will be doing selective breeding (i.e. influencing a genepool of an animal so it has specific traits). Selective breeding would most likely require some knowledge that should be noted in your character’s skills. If this point is applicable, please revise.
2. As you know, points 1 a, b, and c from my last post still apply. Point 1a seems quite straightforward to me, as it’s a matter of considering why Heidi is that way. But to address your concerns: I suggest you try roleplaying her with someone in Skype, or writing a few passages as her. It might help you get a better feel for the character.
That’s all. If you have any more questions or concerns, let me know.
1. The skill changes are fine; competent horse riding and wagon-driving would not be difficult to achieve. However, I’ve noticed you haven’t included any skill that includes animal breeding. Was this intentional? I understand that animal breeding doesn’t quite involve a skill, but in some parts of your application you imply Heidi will be doing selective breeding (i.e. influencing a genepool of an animal so it has specific traits). Selective breeding would most likely require some knowledge that should be noted in your character’s skills. If this point is applicable, please revise.
2. As you know, points 1 a, b, and c from my last post still apply. Point 1a seems quite straightforward to me, as it’s a matter of considering why Heidi is that way. But to address your concerns: I suggest you try roleplaying her with someone in Skype, or writing a few passages as her. It might help you get a better feel for the character.
That’s all. If you have any more questions or concerns, let me know.
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