22-01-2014, 07:08 PM
Your revisions pass so far. However, Zark and I were discussing the inclusion of Dranscey in Mathias’s backstory. We decided that Dranscey needs a lore approved before you involve it in any future backstories, including Mathias’s. Please submit a lore proposal for Dranscey, or revise your application accordingly. That’s all, for now. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them. Good luck.


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