26-01-2014, 11:02 PM
Hi, Tig. Someone else will be reviewing your recent revisions (i.e. the sword stuff), but I’ll be responsible for all-else. This includes the following minor points:
1. “Run-of-the-Mill Tactics, especially those pertaining to defense” This needs a rank indication in the style of the skill guide. Please revise.
2. “Basic Trading and Business, for selling steel.“ As a blacksmith, why would he need to sell steel? Or is steel supposed to be an informal term for the things he makes? Please elaborate/clarify.
That’s all from me. Good luck.
1. “Run-of-the-Mill Tactics, especially those pertaining to defense” This needs a rank indication in the style of the skill guide. Please revise.
2. “Basic Trading and Business, for selling steel.“ As a blacksmith, why would he need to sell steel? Or is steel supposed to be an informal term for the things he makes? Please elaborate/clarify.
That’s all from me. Good luck.
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