Hey, Dracon. My name is FireDog and I will be grading your Mesalia application and back-story.
Okay, so this a first grading. A first grading means that I am going to give some general notes so that you may patch up some larger holes. We will then see how things go from there when we get to polishing up the app.
1. Lore: The first thing I noticed is the lack of lore relation. Please read our Mesalia Lore and include specifics such as the other races, and your characters thoughts or actions taken place with current lore events.
Before we continue, I will give you an example application. Your application and story does not have to be as long as this one, but note the formatting, length, and detail. The story justifies skills and personality of the character which is something you should take note of. For help with character skills.
Thanks for applying and good luck!
Okay, so this a first grading. A first grading means that I am going to give some general notes so that you may patch up some larger holes. We will then see how things go from there when we get to polishing up the app.
1. Lore: The first thing I noticed is the lack of lore relation. Please read our Mesalia Lore and include specifics such as the other races, and your characters thoughts or actions taken place with current lore events.
Before we continue, I will give you an example application. Your application and story does not have to be as long as this one, but note the formatting, length, and detail. The story justifies skills and personality of the character which is something you should take note of. For help with character skills.
Thanks for applying and good luck!