[FireDog]

You're very close demo. If you follow what I say here to cue you should be okay. But it is not yet at what I really want.

Skills:

Still need to remove the "Less than novice" Archery or revise.

Blacksmithing is a job skill regardless of being said so or not by your deems as it is a profession. Either remove this or remove another. If you have black smithing as a skill, it is there as a job skill.

I also want to ask why you want your character to be so...Self sufficient?

Okay, well, regardless. You are going to have to do a few things before this can be right. And you have a few ways to do so.

Drop archery and remove one skill, preferably smithing. Note, we have a smith in setting who is higher skill than your character

Raise archery to novice and drop two other skills.

Change skills to be something with 1 competent and three novice.

Also, I think it may be a good idea to warn you about horse care as we currently have no tamed horses in setting.

Note: I'd ask of you to drop smithing. Particularly because it does not relate to anything else and we have a better smith in setting.

Please revise.