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[Pending] Demotheus's Application
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(29-05-2014, 09:38 PM)FireDog Wrote: -snip-

I was thinking of changing the entire perspective of her backstory to one that's first person so that it better explains her thought's.

I've seen some people do that, and get accepted, but I'm not sure it'll work for me due to some of the feedback referring to things she would not know. How would I go about explaining that while writing in the first person?
  


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[Pending] Demotheus's Application - by Demotheus - 05-02-2014, 07:23 PM
RE: [New] Demotheus's Application - by Michelle - 06-02-2014, 08:21 AM
RE: [New] Demotheus's Application - by Michelle - 07-02-2014, 08:42 AM
RE: [New] Demotheus's Application - by Demotheus - 07-02-2014, 09:05 AM
RE: [WIP] Demotheus's Application - by Demotheus - 12-05-2014, 10:39 PM
RE: [WIP] Demotheus's Application - by FireDog - 13-05-2014, 04:30 PM
RE: [Pending] Demotheus's Application - by Demotheus - 29-05-2014, 09:47 PM

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