30-05-2014, 05:28 AM
Well, I can give some advice but this is mostly out of personal preference.
I'm not one for using first person in Mesalia. It's just something I dislike. Third person has a way of being far easier to capture a story and tell the story without having to worry too much about capturing your character's voice and tone in the writing. Writing first person requires you to adapt your character and write how'd they write or speak, which is fairly difficult at times.
I would just stick to third person narrative. It allows you to use your own voice without complication. Many writers, especially when writing in first person, forget about voice and tone and have a hard time capturing it.
If I am to offer advice, it would be to stick with the third person. Ways around her not knowing things may be to find them out later, in a first person, but usually it can be limiting in how you write.
I'm not one for using first person in Mesalia. It's just something I dislike. Third person has a way of being far easier to capture a story and tell the story without having to worry too much about capturing your character's voice and tone in the writing. Writing first person requires you to adapt your character and write how'd they write or speak, which is fairly difficult at times.
I would just stick to third person narrative. It allows you to use your own voice without complication. Many writers, especially when writing in first person, forget about voice and tone and have a hard time capturing it.
If I am to offer advice, it would be to stick with the third person. Ways around her not knowing things may be to find them out later, in a first person, but usually it can be limiting in how you write.