(23-06-2014, 11:38 AM)ezo12 Wrote: I've played Warhammer
RTS's.
Sindri
You think I can’t see what’s happening here? =) I hope you understand this as I do...
Hello, Ezo, I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.
- ‘Many of Sindri's brothers went out, along with his father to fight in the name of the Purge, some never returned. In Sindri's teen years, he saw little to no combat, and though his father showed him how to swing an old sword and shoot a bow’ The wording here makes it seem contradictory, how did his father teach him to fight, and later ride a horse, if he left home? Please clarify this point.
- ‘People spoke of Xitians repairing their way back to Mesalian soil.’ No one knew that this was happening until the portal re-opened. Please revise.
- ‘I'm fairly surprised that there weren't any questions about God-Modding, Power-gaming or Meta-gaming.’ Everything you need to know on that subject is found here under server rules. Swot up, you’ll be tested on this!
That's all for now. Bump this thread when you have finished the necessary edits and we can continue