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[Approved]Brew's App, Rose returns
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Puppy Thomas: This was just poor phrasing, it was actually closer to when Rosalie was 6 and Thomas was 8. Added a phrase to better indicate the time frame on this.

Gate to the Dusk Realm: This was just me being bad at the newer time system, I was still thinking one month was one year. Added a few sentences in the second to last paragraph to clear this up.

Flowers to ink: I was thinking of colored ink in something like this. Also added a mention about creating black ink.

Gardening: I was thinking that four years working in a garden and harvesting plants would make her an apprentice at keeping plants alive, harvesting them, and replanting them. However, if it's an issue it can be changed.
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[Approved]Brew's App, Rose returns - by Brewstone - 30-06-2014, 11:48 PM
RE: [New]Brew's App, Rose returns - by LuckyLeaf - 01-07-2014, 09:21 AM
RE: [Pending]Brew's App, Rose returns - by Brewstone - 01-07-2014, 10:01 AM

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