10-07-2014, 12:12 AM
Hello again, we're back to this again, and one step away from getting you approved.
Gate to the Dusk Realm: So the gates opened, and the entire realm was holding its breath. It was such a tense moment in history, so much so that the civil war eventually came to a stop in some places. Now, while Stross is sailing around the seven seas all wrapped in his melancholic bliss, he'd still would have heard of the gates opening and how big a deal that is.
So I'd like you to add in that bit into the story; how such events affected Stross, and if they didn't, why not.
Bump the thread when you're done!
Gate to the Dusk Realm: So the gates opened, and the entire realm was holding its breath. It was such a tense moment in history, so much so that the civil war eventually came to a stop in some places. Now, while Stross is sailing around the seven seas all wrapped in his melancholic bliss, he'd still would have heard of the gates opening and how big a deal that is.
So I'd like you to add in that bit into the story; how such events affected Stross, and if they didn't, why not.
Bump the thread when you're done!