[Accepted] Gilbert Greenwish

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[Accepted] Gilbert Greenwish

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12-07-2014, 09:37 AM

I've done some minor edits; I made Reina a Ko'ban, which is why she speaks it.
The words she uses are:

Ah'ro: Father
Ha, id: Yes, you
Maj kor'rim: Something along the lines of: 'So worthless'
Jak'Kricka: Xitian
Banu: Family

That's it, there are no other changes to the story.

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[Accepted] Gilbert Greenwish - by LuckyLeaf - 30-06-2014, 06:20 PM

RE: [New2] Gilbert Greenwish - by LuckyLeaf - 03-07-2014, 08:10 AM

RE: [New2] Gilbert Greenwish - by LuckyLeaf - 12-07-2014, 09:37 AM

RE: [New2] Gilbert Greenwish - by Hutchy - 29-07-2014, 10:43 PM

RE: [Pending2] Gilbert Greenwish - by LuckyLeaf - 30-07-2014, 12:56 AM

RE: [Pending2] Gilbert Greenwish - by Hutchy - 01-08-2014, 09:53 PM

RE: [Pending2] Gilbert Greenwish - by LuckyLeaf - 01-08-2014, 10:07 PM

RE: [Pending2] Gilbert Greenwish - by Hutchy - 04-08-2014, 08:23 PM

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