[Hutchy]

NO COMBAT SKILLS WHATSOEVER

Anyway... Gonna clarify for anyone reading that wants to call shenanigans about a certain something, this is an experiment and has been agreed upon with staff, please feel free to ask us any questions you may have.

Now onto the feedback.

• ​First, I need to ask that you address lore relation in the latter half of your character's backstory, namely the war ending and the dusk portal re-opening. I imagine with them being a travelling circus they'd hear something of it.
  

 

• ​Next, about the formatting, your character's race is necessary and the level of the mastery of their powers should be included in their skills, a guide for which can be found here.
  

 

• Lastly, you should try to write an extended version of your character's personality rather than restricting it to a couple points, ditto with appearance.​
  

​That's all for now, bump the thread when you've made the edits and we can continue. God, this editor is weird.