So there are two things that I noticed that I think needs fixing.
Skills: Alright, so Damian has too many skills for his age. At the age of 18, when he would've more or less started learning to become a healer round the age of 10, two skills in that field leveled 'competent' is rather unlikely. Add to that fact that he has three other miscellaneous skills listed as well.
I would suggest checking with the skill guide, but here's what you could do: You could bring down Herbalism a level, bung Toxicology under 'knowledge', rather than skill, and drop Trapping.
As there are no mentions of Damian learning to trap animals in the backstory, nor Toxicology, I think this could be reasonable changes, and you'd be left with a competent skill, and two apprentice skills.
Poison: A tidbit; please refer to the Toxic plants guide here, and change your choice of poison to something we have on our guide. I'm sure you will be able to find a suitable one.
Alright, that's it, bump the thread once you're done.
Skills: Alright, so Damian has too many skills for his age. At the age of 18, when he would've more or less started learning to become a healer round the age of 10, two skills in that field leveled 'competent' is rather unlikely. Add to that fact that he has three other miscellaneous skills listed as well.
I would suggest checking with the skill guide, but here's what you could do: You could bring down Herbalism a level, bung Toxicology under 'knowledge', rather than skill, and drop Trapping.
As there are no mentions of Damian learning to trap animals in the backstory, nor Toxicology, I think this could be reasonable changes, and you'd be left with a competent skill, and two apprentice skills.
Poison: A tidbit; please refer to the Toxic plants guide here, and change your choice of poison to something we have on our guide. I'm sure you will be able to find a suitable one.
Alright, that's it, bump the thread once you're done.