[Graf]

Hello, Graf. I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.

Well met.

Your backstory needs more relation to the setting’s lore, which can be found here.

I actually meant to write about this but clean forgot. On it.
Edit: Incorporated the civil war into it.

The backstory needs to show more description of how she was as a child, how she was through adolescence and then into adulthood.

Would you like to know what colour curtains her mother hanged up on what days? /s
I'll bullshit something in. I don't see the point in ever writing about this kind of stuff so I left it out.
Edit: Left myself a plan, done about half of it. Should be a nice 8-9 paras when I'm finished.

On your skills section, you seem to have put a level next to categories of skills.

Ah! Seems I misunderstood that page... Will fix.
Edit: Fixerino'd, will need to balance when I update the bio.

That's all for now.

"for now" ;-;

What timezone are you, if I may ask?