04-07-2016, 07:13 PM
Hello, Burgundy, sorry for the wait. My name is Hutchy, and I'll be helping you through whitelisting. What you have here is a good start, but there's something I'd like you to work on.
I'd like to see your backstory connected more to the server's lore, because of the character's age, namely the Civil War and Dusk Portal reopening. At your discretion you could also mention something about the Purges which took place in his early infancy, but this won't be necessary.
I'd like to see your backstory connected more to the server's lore, because of the character's age, namely the Civil War and Dusk Portal reopening. At your discretion you could also mention something about the Purges which took place in his early infancy, but this won't be necessary.