08-09-2016, 10:30 PM
Hello, Geeky. I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.
Alright, first things first, I need to see more relation to the servers lore, which can be found here. Being 23, she'll have been born shortly before the Civil War ended. Make sure to make mention of these and following events in your character's backstory.
Also, we ask that you show us some progression in your character's backstory, showing us how the events through their life helped them become the person they are.
Speaking of backstory, it needs to end with either your character arriving in or travelling to where the setting takes place. For ease of reference, it's a town called Nightveil.
For your skills, I recommend that you read this skill guide to help you give a 'level' to your skills to help me judge the realism of the character. It'll explain to you how to level your character's skills based on their age and amount of time they studied that skill.
That's all for now, bump this thread when you've made the edits and we'll see where that takes us.
Alright, first things first, I need to see more relation to the servers lore, which can be found here. Being 23, she'll have been born shortly before the Civil War ended. Make sure to make mention of these and following events in your character's backstory.
Also, we ask that you show us some progression in your character's backstory, showing us how the events through their life helped them become the person they are.
Speaking of backstory, it needs to end with either your character arriving in or travelling to where the setting takes place. For ease of reference, it's a town called Nightveil.
For your skills, I recommend that you read this skill guide to help you give a 'level' to your skills to help me judge the realism of the character. It'll explain to you how to level your character's skills based on their age and amount of time they studied that skill.
That's all for now, bump this thread when you've made the edits and we'll see where that takes us.