18-10-2016, 02:08 PM
So sorry for the long wait, Young. Life does that sometimes.
First things first, I need you to link your backstory to the server's lore here. At 24 he was born soon after the Civil War began.
After he gets introduced to the man it gets somewhat difficult to follow. It looks like he's going to get involved with a crime, then it looks like he's going to convince the governor that explosives are valuable, then he's under arrest for setting a warehouse full of explosives on fire.
As regards to this part, it seems to be pretty damn big. That in mind I'll need more details.
That's all I have for now. Bump this thread when you've finished your edits, we'll continue from there.
First things first, I need you to link your backstory to the server's lore here. At 24 he was born soon after the Civil War began.
After he gets introduced to the man it gets somewhat difficult to follow. It looks like he's going to get involved with a crime, then it looks like he's going to convince the governor that explosives are valuable, then he's under arrest for setting a warehouse full of explosives on fire.
(11-10-2016, 10:10 AM)LuckyLeaf Wrote: But one time he went too far, and angered the wrong man. In the process of getting away, he angered many more, including a dragon, which in turn angered hundreds of more people.
As regards to this part, it seems to be pretty damn big. That in mind I'll need more details.
That's all I have for now. Bump this thread when you've finished your edits, we'll continue from there.