11-12-2016, 06:56 PM
Alright, hello and welcome back, I'll be taking a look at your app.
There are just two things that I'd like you to consider.
Lore: Basically, I'd like Rhion's story to mesh a little bit more with our server's lore. Currently there are dragons about and the portal to the Dusk Realm had been reopened. How Rhion's life was affected, or wasn't affected by such events would be appreciated.
Skills: At the moment, the levels of skills Rhion possesses are a bit of a stretch, I'm afraid. Assuming he picked up the pickpocketing skill because he was among thieves, but wasn't taught the skill directly, because the band mainly used him as a distraction, I'd say the skill could be lowered to apprentice, that is, unless you wish to make changes in the backstory. If you do want to edit the backstory to fit in the pickpocketing skill better, so that Rhion would have two competent skills, then I'll have to ask you to raise his age by about 3~4 years.
Think that's about it for now, please bump the thread once you're done editing.
There are just two things that I'd like you to consider.
Lore: Basically, I'd like Rhion's story to mesh a little bit more with our server's lore. Currently there are dragons about and the portal to the Dusk Realm had been reopened. How Rhion's life was affected, or wasn't affected by such events would be appreciated.
Skills: At the moment, the levels of skills Rhion possesses are a bit of a stretch, I'm afraid. Assuming he picked up the pickpocketing skill because he was among thieves, but wasn't taught the skill directly, because the band mainly used him as a distraction, I'd say the skill could be lowered to apprentice, that is, unless you wish to make changes in the backstory. If you do want to edit the backstory to fit in the pickpocketing skill better, so that Rhion would have two competent skills, then I'll have to ask you to raise his age by about 3~4 years.
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Think that's about it for now, please bump the thread once you're done editing.