23-09-2017, 08:10 PM
Hello, Melon. Sorry for the wait. I'm Hutchy and I'll be helping you through whitelisting.
Much as we appreciate time skips are sometimes necessary, I'd like you to give us some idea what happened in that 10 year gap.
Next, we'll need an explanation of why the town's kinda suddenly on fire, following on from that a quick word on what the survivors of the fire did and how Caius got into a position where he's now living with his uncle.
That's about all I have for now. Post again in this thread when you've made the edits and we'll continue from there. Bonus points for highlighting your edits in a different colour.
Much as we appreciate time skips are sometimes necessary, I'd like you to give us some idea what happened in that 10 year gap.
Next, we'll need an explanation of why the town's kinda suddenly on fire, following on from that a quick word on what the survivors of the fire did and how Caius got into a position where he's now living with his uncle.
That's about all I have for now. Post again in this thread when you've made the edits and we'll continue from there. Bonus points for highlighting your edits in a different colour.