[Yamushu]

Hey Yamushu, sorry for the wait. Here's some feedback for you.

The easy stuff first. From how you've formatted your skill section, it seems as if you've read or at least very accurately preempted our skill guide! What I need though is for you to clearly note which skills are at what level. Your ranking for hunting is perfectly in line with what we like to see (Hunting - Expert). In case you've not seen the guide, here's a link.

Second, your character's backstory is required to have ties to the server lore, found here. Specifically, we need mention of your character or their community's position in the Civil War and the Dusk Portal reopening. They seem to live quite a sheltered life, so to say that it went mostly unnoticed would naturally be acceptable, or they could have involvement in them as you like.


That's all I have for you right now. Bump this thread when you've made your edits and we'll continue from there.

I have a small question-- is there anywhere I can find more information on the Civil War that went on? It seems to be briefly glossed over, and that makes trying to piece together that part of history a bit difficult. The only sentence that goes real into the Civil War is simply: "For two decades a great civil war raged throughout the Mainland continent while new settlements struggled to fight dusk creatures and more to be established in the Forbidden Lands." Civil War implies it would be a big kingdom fighting against itself. If that was the case, what kingdom? Why did the people start to revolt? Why did the need to fight grow so much? All it says is that "conflict rose," but like... what conflict? what happened? It's left really unclear.
I'm sorry for overloading you with questions, and I will get to the issues you mentioned. I'm most likely going to scrap Parzival all together, as I got some good ol' (better) character inspiration while trying to sleep last night. Thank you for responding in a rather timely manner.