[Michelle]

I am impressed. I mostly like how your lists have elaboration; it gives them plenty of depth.

1. "a sharp, but crudely made obsidian hunting knife, with a stag antler handle." I would make this a stone knife at the very most. Please revise.
2. Your character's skillset is misleading. The length makes it seem too much for your character initially, but the most of the skills mentioned could fit under hunting or survivalism. For more clarity, I highly recommend you categorise them under a spoiler or header, or at least order these skills from strongest to weakest. This isn't compulsory.

That's all. Good luck.

EDIT: 3. "Not so good at Mesalian. The common Mesalian language is Caine's second language. His first is Yakienevic, the language spoken in the mountains of Yakienev. His parents have been decent tutors in the language, but he doesn't know how to read it, and people with accents may be hard for him to understand." All new languages require lore proposals. Please submit a lore proposal for this, or revise.