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[Whitelisted] Application of B'tone Alliman
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Thank you Pinkie! I pretty much changed the organizational structure of the paragraphs for flow, but I colored the text that I had revised. Anything else, and I'll be happy to jump on it to improve!
  


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Re: [New] Application of B'tone Alliman - by Robodragon - 09-04-2013, 12:33 PM

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