24-06-2014, 03:21 PM
Fixed!
* Old Bill has gone to heaven
"THUNG
Edward was rolling on the floor, mud staining his eyes and clothing. He heard shouting. His vision was blurred and his head was heavy. He snapped out if it. He had to move. Scraping himself from the floor, Edward took off on foot. Over his shoulder he saw Old Bill the horse, with an arrow protruding from his head. A sickness fell upon Edward, but he knew he must address this later."
* Slixor's story is to be unfolded! I wanted to address this in game so I have sewn the seeds of it in the story.
"Slixor saw a lot of himself in the boy. His drive and morale. Every day, the two grew more and more inseparable."
* Old Bill has gone to heaven
"THUNG
Edward was rolling on the floor, mud staining his eyes and clothing. He heard shouting. His vision was blurred and his head was heavy. He snapped out if it. He had to move. Scraping himself from the floor, Edward took off on foot. Over his shoulder he saw Old Bill the horse, with an arrow protruding from his head. A sickness fell upon Edward, but he knew he must address this later."
* Slixor's story is to be unfolded! I wanted to address this in game so I have sewn the seeds of it in the story.
"Slixor saw a lot of himself in the boy. His drive and morale. Every day, the two grew more and more inseparable."