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[Approved] Gustav Yamira
#1
Gustav Yamira
23
Mesalian
Jeweler
Appearance:
5’6, 115 lbs. Gustav is meek and small in appearance. His skin is quite pale, reflecting his absence from excessive sunlight for the majority of his life. He is quite skinny, and has very little muscle, never needing to be quite physically strong in his work. Brilliant royal blue eyes glint with life and hope and happiness, opposing the rest of his body and stance, which gives off an air of tired, clutched unsteadiness. His hair is a dark blonde, filled with unruly curls that even the most vigorous brushing and cutting could not keep at bay. His face usually appears hollow and vacant, looking as though he isn’t quite there, but somewhere distant, somewhere happier. All of his features are quite small, nose, ears, cheeks, and mouth, all of which contain small amounts of freckles. His posture is slouched and even submissive, making him appear even smaller than he actually is.
Small hands for work. Delicate touch to his long fingers. One silver ring on each hand, each appearing plain, though upon closer inspection ornately carved patters flow throughout, detailed waves for one, intricate tree bark on the other. Both have initials engraved on the insides, of mother and father respectively. He dresses simply, with silver accents that give off a richer past. Long, thin, plain black garments cover his body, neat and clean and tidy. Black boots and silver buckles that could serve as mirrors, the shine they posses.

Personality:
Skills:

Jewelry Making: Competent:
- Thins includes the crafting of molds. The intricate carving of metals, wood, etc. Jem cutting, Jem setting, and intricate design of said materials.

Reading/Writing: Apprentice:
-Gustav used to be much better with reading and writing, along with speaking, tho these things have become fairly shaky as he hasn't written or read in quite a long time, and has forgotten some of the smaller things like pronunciation of longer words and spellings.

Backstory:
Arrives with:
- A small container of tobacco
- A black wooden smoking pipe
- The clothing in the appearance description
#2
not to uhm...seem impatient but this is ready for grading whenever anyone has the free time
#3
I'd like to propose that even though I may not be ready for a second character, that this, addmittedly quite old, application be graded. If it eventually gets passed it could be withheld until staff thinks I'm ready for it.

If not, It's probably long past time for this to be trashed. Staff can decide whichever they want to do.
#4
Ahoy French!

Staff's going to look at this application. At the moment the WLers are just very busy and we're trying to work things out asap. I'm sorry about this inconvenience.
#5
The much awaited feedback. Take notes, there's a lot... not really, just this one point.
  • Only one point to bring up on this, French, and that’s to ask why one of the servants didn’t act to free him sooner? Currently I'm under the impression that there were no obstacles to this end.

That's it for feedback right now. Bump the thread when you have addressed the issue and we'll continue from there. Also, if you could please highlight your edits, I'd appreciate it.
  


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