01-03-2015, 11:01 AM
I was away for the weekend. I will have a response for you soon.
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SentaiPink
Flufflemackalacka Adorkable II, Queen of pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows.
Flufflemackalacka Adorkable II, Queen of pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows.
01-03-2015, 01:23 PM
My points of interest on the application were not that of telling you to remove parts of the application, but that there are conflicts with what you have written here and what is in the Herbalism Lore. I need only the conflicts corrected.
Sleeping medicines:
My suggestion for the arrow/surgery of your back story is to, (in order for this to be in keeping with the lore and how a surgery should be preformed with it) simply add a carefully measured dose of Irid Cap to his tea.
The reason for this -
The way the back story is written implies heavily that the tea given to him was to cause sleep in a way that would allow your character to do surgery. What you have currently would not keep a man asleep during this procedure, the irid cap on the leg numbs the pain and feeling in the leg but the man can still move it which when preforming surgery is a bad thing.
If you intend not to have him subdued during the surgery then the tea is giving the wrong impression and that needs revised. The sleep effects of the tea wont cause a man with an arrow in the knee to fall asleep while it's still in there or being removed.
Surgery:
My point was only my thoughts on how the procedure would be done with period appropriate tools and medicine. I don't need you to change anything with how the surgery is preformed. My point was constructive criticism in case you were unclear on the process. Sorry if I gave the impression I wanted the surgery removed.
Poison:
We have a lore proposal in the works currently for the release of poison lore. We can post that on the forums but it is not close to done. Which worries me about delaying your character any further because I know you're probably eager to RP.
Poisons are sort of outside of the realm of the kind of healing I feel like the Isohel's followers wouldn't study how to make them as part of the normal course of study, but more so how to treat them. If he studied them independently, enough so to make poisons of his own, he would need
1) poison making skill of some sort and mention in the back story of taking interest in. (But you may need to remove a skill to make room for poisons.)
2) Poison lore - We will post what we have on the forums and you can contribute to finishing this project. We can't have someone trained in a deadly skill with no lore behind how it works, we do this to avoid any powergaming or OPness and so people know what they're getting into when they get poisoned.
Also books are a thing, and while it takes time, your character can always learn new skills as points of advancement and growth for the character via rp.
Sleeping medicines:
My suggestion for the arrow/surgery of your back story is to, (in order for this to be in keeping with the lore and how a surgery should be preformed with it) simply add a carefully measured dose of Irid Cap to his tea.
The reason for this -
The way the back story is written implies heavily that the tea given to him was to cause sleep in a way that would allow your character to do surgery. What you have currently would not keep a man asleep during this procedure, the irid cap on the leg numbs the pain and feeling in the leg but the man can still move it which when preforming surgery is a bad thing.
If you intend not to have him subdued during the surgery then the tea is giving the wrong impression and that needs revised. The sleep effects of the tea wont cause a man with an arrow in the knee to fall asleep while it's still in there or being removed.
Surgery:
My point was only my thoughts on how the procedure would be done with period appropriate tools and medicine. I don't need you to change anything with how the surgery is preformed. My point was constructive criticism in case you were unclear on the process. Sorry if I gave the impression I wanted the surgery removed.
Poison:
We have a lore proposal in the works currently for the release of poison lore. We can post that on the forums but it is not close to done. Which worries me about delaying your character any further because I know you're probably eager to RP.
Poisons are sort of outside of the realm of the kind of healing I feel like the Isohel's followers wouldn't study how to make them as part of the normal course of study, but more so how to treat them. If he studied them independently, enough so to make poisons of his own, he would need
1) poison making skill of some sort and mention in the back story of taking interest in. (But you may need to remove a skill to make room for poisons.)
2) Poison lore - We will post what we have on the forums and you can contribute to finishing this project. We can't have someone trained in a deadly skill with no lore behind how it works, we do this to avoid any powergaming or OPness and so people know what they're getting into when they get poisoned.
Also books are a thing, and while it takes time, your character can always learn new skills as points of advancement and growth for the character via rp.
chnpo
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Thank you for the help, I will get to that. Also I think Isohel's followers would know about poisons because they are trying to collect as much knowledge as they can. However I do understand that the lore is not made for for poisons, so could Damian have the knowledge once the lore is accepted. If you agree to this, I will make some IC rule up for Damian not using or talking about his knowledge.
SentaiPink
Flufflemackalacka Adorkable II, Queen of pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows.
Flufflemackalacka Adorkable II, Queen of pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows.
03-03-2015, 08:01 AM
Unfortunately staff isn't comfortable with a character possessing a skill there is no lore for. Even if he doesn't use it.
I will release what there is of the lore after work [12+ hours from now]. If you want to help complete it before joining the server that is your choice. Otherwise the changes I mentioned before are the only items left for reviewing. Let me know if you want the character reviewed now or wait for lore.
I will release what there is of the lore after work [12+ hours from now]. If you want to help complete it before joining the server that is your choice. Otherwise the changes I mentioned before are the only items left for reviewing. Let me know if you want the character reviewed now or wait for lore.