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[Accepted] Julian Ophilia Garnson
#1
Name: (Current Alias) Julian Ophilia Garnson

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Julian dresses as he imagines his current character should be dressed as. Currently, he has garnered himself in an adventurer's garb. With a thick coat and sturdy boots, accompanied by a worn vintage leather vest he stole borrowed off a sleeping fully attentive and charming young man, who he happened upon. 

As for his looks at the moment, he tries to look the part of an aristocrat, and looks like a man trying to look like an aristocrat. His long dark hair hangs in a ponytail and he tries to make his dull eyes shine as much as possible when the light allows for it. He holds himself tall, and tries to reflect the image of a proud man. 

Personality: 

Julian likes himself, and makes it evident he likes himself. Aside from that, everything depends on his mood. But he does have a taste for the theatrics, so there's that.

Skill:

Spear Proficiency: Competent
Pickpocket: Apprentice

Backstory:

Stuff brought:

An iron capped staff
The clothes on his back
A couple of coins
A couple of dice
A couple of marbles
#2
So sorry for the long wait, Young. Life does that sometimes.

First things first, I need you to link your backstory to the server's lore here. At 24 he was born soon after the Civil War began.

After he gets introduced to the man it gets somewhat difficult to follow. It looks like he's going to get involved with a crime, then it looks like he's going to convince the governor that explosives are valuable, then he's under arrest for setting a warehouse full of explosives on fire.

(11-10-2016, 10:10 AM)LuckyLeaf Wrote: But one time he went too far, and angered the wrong man. In the process of getting away, he angered many more, including a dragon, which in turn angered hundreds of more people. 

As regards to this part, it seems to be pretty damn big. That in mind I'll need more details.


That's all I have for now. Bump this thread when you've finished your edits, we'll continue from there.
#3
Done, the changes are in green. 

Also, Julian had had no interaction with Mortimer the judge before. His friend had, and Julian only heard of the man, as Julian was still just a lowly beggar in the streets. 
So Julian was never involved in the initial crime, but did commit the ones in the barbaric town.
#4
Alright, Young, I'm passing you. Though I'm doing so with a small bend, it sounds like you hint at Zark at the end. Zark keeps her name off of everything cause she tries to keep her place of residence hidden from X number of people for multiple and various reasons. However, you mention he has ventured through other towns of the Forbidden Land, so, I'm going to allow a rumour to be possible to pick up.
  


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