28-09-2013, 03:44 AM
Round two. Sorry this has taken a while; I need (and still need) some second opinions and haven't been able to get them.
1. The reason Diana ended up learning to make glass isn't very clear. Did she choose it on her own? If so, why? How does she feel about it? Please elaborate.
2. I'm still not sure about the elephant-siege thing, which is what I'm getting a second opinion for at the moment. Will let you know when the staff have a decision.
Otherwise, this looks okay. I would have posted this after I got the second opinion, but it's been almost two days since you updated, and I didn't want to stretch this out. So for now, you have something to work on at least.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
1. The reason Diana ended up learning to make glass isn't very clear. Did she choose it on her own? If so, why? How does she feel about it? Please elaborate.
2. I'm still not sure about the elephant-siege thing, which is what I'm getting a second opinion for at the moment. Will let you know when the staff have a decision.
Otherwise, this looks okay. I would have posted this after I got the second opinion, but it's been almost two days since you updated, and I didn't want to stretch this out. So for now, you have something to work on at least.
Sorry for the inconvenience.
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