01-03-2014, 04:20 PM
Hai RL!
For Jie, I got one point from the Lyrxi-feedback:
Leaving circumstances
Related to above, there's little or no consideration for the leaving circumstances. I'm referring to:
1) End of winter - early spring. It had in the old setting been stated already that the hunting was null in the area. Combined with:
2) Lack of food supplies. Ravenna was already starving. The Minwu's likely took some, but there's also a reason why escaping Ravenna by foot was NOT an option for the chars in the setting. The supplies wouldn't last.
While I'm aware that the leave was necessary, above shouldn't be ignored.
For Jie, I got one point from the Lyrxi-feedback:
Leaving circumstances
Related to above, there's little or no consideration for the leaving circumstances. I'm referring to:
1) End of winter - early spring. It had in the old setting been stated already that the hunting was null in the area. Combined with:
2) Lack of food supplies. Ravenna was already starving. The Minwu's likely took some, but there's also a reason why escaping Ravenna by foot was NOT an option for the chars in the setting. The supplies wouldn't last.
While I'm aware that the leave was necessary, above shouldn't be ignored.